The original Man Ray photo.
My attempt to a technical reproduction.

18 comments:

Nadja said...

As you can see:
My attempt to a technical reproduction could be a lot better.
Not just the pose.
I could not do what she does with her head and hand.
Impossible to keep that pose for longer than a second.
But, my camera angle. ...
I had control over that, still, I didn't realize how wrong it was.
I will have to do a new attempt.

erin said...

jesusgod.))))

i wouldn't want you to do what she does with her head and hand. this is perfect.

xo
erin

Nadja said...

:-))
It's just impossible.
It made me wonder if Man Ray did a surpise shot, and that it's just fraction of a movement that we see.
But, I guess not.
Thank you very much, Erin!
Same thing here by the way:
Only if I, or my own tripod, holds the camera I won't run. ...
Other photographers aren't good enough to make a decent photo of me. ...
"-))
XXX

CLICK CLICK... said...

How about setting the timer for more tim? Or program ur camera for 3 or 5 or more consecutive shots?

Nadja said...

Yes. I have a wireless shutter release.
And than I use the maximum time on my camera, 10 seconds.
But that's still not enough for this hand pose. !
How she bends her arm and her hand, that's just impossible for me.
Especially together with the direction the head is turned.
You should try it...
Be sure someone is in the neighbourhood for when you cramp up!
:-))
I think you can see on her face she wasn't exactly comfortable either.
I don't think my flah could follow 3 shots.
We are in Belgium here.
And even for us it's very dark weather the last months.
Terrible.
Had to use the flash.
Another problem, I can't use the wireless shutter release with the external flash.
I had to use the flash on camera and bounce it on the wall.
Damned...
I thought I found the solution for my self portraits. ...
teacher says I have to buy a decent, read expencive one. ...
That will work.
Maybe not on my cheap camera though!
:-))

Oh, I'm writing a book here. ...
Thank you very much for the tips, CLICK CLICK...!

XXX

Nadja said...

CLICK CLICK...
I am messing up SO badly these days.
It's just horrible!
I will save the story about my second technical reproduction assignment for later...
Another disaster, I am so clumpsy...
And I act like an absolute beginner.
HELP....!!!

Nadja said...

Clumsy!

I mean: I am so clumsy!
You see now???

AAAAHHHH!!!!!

Sinobjetivo said...

I think the picture is good, does not seem relevant body posture, I think the effort must come from the light. In the portrait of Man Ray is a very nice light and dark shadows but in your picture do not have the same force. Try to solve regardless of flash lighting.
Nadja Certainly I can write in French? It would be easier for me.
With much love a hug

Nadja said...

Second try.
Difficulties with placing comments here.

Yes, Dámaso, you are absolutely right about the light!
The direction of the light is good, I think, but not the force.
I need a sunny day, but we don't have those lately.
I am limited with photos that I can copy.
It's too dark for everything.
And I don't have studio lights.

Yes, Dámaso, you can write in French!
I understand some French.
And, it translates better than Spanish in the Google translator.

Thank you very much, Dámaso!
Big XXX and hug for you, too!

Eddy said...

a good try, but Man Ray probably has an additional light source used to get a light shadow ratio, but your model is more beautiful than his one ...

Nadja said...

Yes, I think so, too.
I thought it was the sun shining inside the room at first.
But, I am not sure anymore, not sure at all.
(I can't try it with sunshine for now.)
That is of course why we get this assignments.
When you look at a photo you think you understand how it's done.
But, it's not always so obvious.

Eddy, you are a real big charmer.
I don't have the curves the model of Man Ray had.
I had to make a lot of effort to fake some curves. ....:-P
But, thank you very much!
XXX

http://colourit.wordpress.com said...

Wat een kanjer !
Ik vind het 'gedurfd' om die man te 'evenaren'!
Hier hou ik wel van!

Nadja said...

Evenaren?
Bedankt hoor, Colourit.
Maar zo zou ik dat toch niet noemen.
Stel je voor morgen in de kranten: Nadja evenaart Man Ray.
:-))
Haha.
Bedankt, Colourit!
XXX

raycho dimitrov said...

that is interesting...
fine work and beautiful line to body.
good reproduction!

Nadja said...

Hello Raycho!
I showed it to the teacher today.
He said it was good.
So, I am happy! :-))
And my second technical reproduction, he said it was great.
I thought it was a complete disaster.
I will put it on the blog soon.
Thank you very much, dear Raycho!
Big warm XXX!

Pierre BOYER said...

Very nice too...

Pierre

Nadja said...

:-))
Thank you very much, Pierre!
Doing a technical reproduction with a self portrait is an extra challenge.
But that's me, I like a challenge.
:-))
XXX

Johann von Brittbrau said...

superbe